I read your stories and liked them all but one (the one with the penguins from Madagascar).
I especially liked "Be Forgot" the most, then "Viva Thundera!"
The ones where he sacrificed himself under the sea or in the pyramid were great too. I liked "In Vegas Veritas" but didn't get the ending; English is not my first language, so sometimes I miss stuff that'd help me understand better.
I have written some stories myself, 4 in total, and was wondering if you'd mind reading them. They're all about Tygta and Cheetara somehow. They're like one big story devided in 4 parts, but I wrote them individually (I called them collectively "The Tygra and Cheetara Chronicles" lol). I'd like you to give me your opinion. The first one is kinda long, the others are shorter. If you agree, I'd translate them to English as they're in Spanish (I'm not a writer, and my English vocabulary is limited lol). Maybe you can help me by suggesting better ways to express the ideas.